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No.1 Ichiko

No.1 Ichiko

Drawing Drawing \ Figure | 12/26/07 @980 | Viatyr | Comments critiques (15) | Views views (459)


No.1 Ichiko
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This is a slightly reworked re-submission, and my first artwork posted here.

Ichiko was created with pencils, scanned in at 300DPI Greyscale, then coloured in Photoshop, using both a mouse and a Tablet.
 
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Avatar Daykan

 12/26/07 @989

Like i told, you have a great style, but you need more work in anatomy, teh head itīs big for the body, the arms need more work in teh muscles and others little details. Background itīs good for me.
Welcome again!
 
Avatar Viatyr

 12/27/07 @033

You're right about the anatomy, if I look at her arm, it's definitely too thin from the elbow down. I'm not sure about her head though, I mean I know it's big, but when I look at it, it looks right for the style (Manga), that said, her head being that size in proportion to her body would indicate that she's much younger, but unfortunately she has breasts, which means she must be older...this unfortunately conflicts. So either hear head is too big, or she should have smaller breasts (LOL). Anyway, thanks for your critique! I'll do better next time.
 
Avatar cherryk

 12/27/07 @083

If you're talking about the chibi style of drawing, then she's too tall to be one. Though the heads of regular anime characters may appear big, everything else is still in proportion to their body. Her hands are too small. Generally, your hand is as long as your face. As both you and Daykan pointed out, the arm needs work. Her neck is too thinck and she lacks a collar bone. Her feet are also too small. I really like the background and the idea of your character design. She's very cute. I like the way you colour.
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 12/27/07 @089

Nice style cool character :)
Welcome to GFX!
 
Avatar thomasM

 12/27/07 @130

nice character design
but though it is somehow cartoonish i think her hand is too small
 
Avatar purplerose

 12/27/07 @293

I like the colors, especially in the hair.
 
Avatar Viatyr

 12/27/07 @429

@ Cherryk: Thanks for your constructive criticism! I do tend to forget things like the collar bone and such, and I agree with most of what you've said. I will improve with my next work, though it might not be manga style (Probably a painting of some sort)

@ARZILLIER66: Thanks for the welcome!

@thomasM: I think it's too small too hehe :)

@purplerose: Thanks for your comment!
 
Avatar Madanapale

 12/27/07 @998

Cute!
Welcome to gFX!
Carlos
 
Avatar Fuchsia

 12/30/07 @746

I agree that to give her a cartoonish anatomy (manga style) all her middle part...(from neck to butt) should have been smaller and hands and feet a little bigger

But She's definetely cool and I love her ouffit too
good start
Welcome !!!
high marks for me
 
Avatar Viatyr

 12/31/07 @349

@Madanapale: Thanks!

@Fuchsia: Thanks for you comment!
 
Avatar gencosman

 01/01/08 @475

Nice concept. . . o_O. . . .
 
Avatar Maidith

 01/01/08 @513

I like your style, great design and the coloring is nice too ^_^
 
Avatar Viatyr

 01/01/08 @619

Thanks Gencosman and Maidith!
 
Avatar takren

 01/01/08 @798

Interesting artwork. Very nice.
Wanna see more jobs!
 
Avatar Viatyr

 01/02/08 @853

Thanks Takren, I hope to have more work soon.
 
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