Like i told, you have a great style, but you need more work in anatomy, teh head it´s big for the body, the arms need more work in teh muscles and others little details. Background it´s good for me.
Welcome again!

You're right about the anatomy, if I look at her arm, it's definitely too thin from the elbow down. I'm not sure about her head though, I mean I know it's big, but when I look at it, it looks right for the style (Manga), that said, her head being that size in proportion to her body would indicate that she's much younger, but unfortunately she has breasts, which means she must be older...this unfortunately conflicts. So either hear head is too big, or she should have smaller breasts (LOL). Anyway, thanks for your critique! I'll do better next time.

If you're talking about the chibi style of drawing, then she's too tall to be one. Though the heads of regular anime characters may appear big, everything else is still in proportion to their body. Her hands are too small. Generally, your hand is as long as your face. As both you and Daykan pointed out, the arm needs work. Her neck is too thinck and she lacks a collar bone. Her feet are also too small. I really like the background and the idea of your character design. She's very cute. I like the way you colour.

Nice style cool character
Welcome to GFX!

nice character design
but though it is somehow cartoonish i think her hand is too small

I like the colors, especially in the hair.

@ Cherryk: Thanks for your constructive criticism! I do tend to forget things like the collar bone and such, and I agree with most of what you've said. I will improve with my next work, though it might not be manga style (Probably a painting of some sort)

@ARZILLIER66: Thanks for the welcome!

@thomasM: I think it's too small too hehe

@purplerose: Thanks for your comment!

Cute!
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Carlos

I agree that to give her a cartoonish anatomy (manga style) all her middle part...(from neck to butt) should have been smaller and hands and feet a little bigger

But She's definetely cool and I love her ouffit too
good start
Welcome !!!
high marks for me

@Madanapale: Thanks!

@Fuchsia: Thanks for you comment!

Nice concept. . . o_O. . . .

I like your style, great design and the coloring is nice too ^_^

Thanks Gencosman and Maidith!

Interesting artwork. Very nice.
Wanna see more jobs!

Thanks Takren, I hope to have more work soon.